Pain - a work in progress

Hi All,

Hope you are all well, as we start to go into the second month of the year.

This is a few verses from a poem that I am working on.  I am not sure if I will finish it soon, but I hope I do.  I am actually finding it quite hard to do, but I am sure that I will get there in the end.

Pain - a work in progress

My battered frame, full of scars and scabs,
readies for the next frontal attack.

My feeble body stands in the darkness,
for the scars and gnashes are hidden.

As I said I am still working on it, and as you can see its quite deep.  But don't worry its not about myself, rather its a poem intended to highlight the terrors that slaves feel throughout the world everyday.

So what do you think?  Is it worth continuing?